Month: September 2010

For Optimal Contract Language, Don’t Follow the Herd

In this post on his Contract Analysis and Contract Standards blog, Kingsley Martin notes that empirical analysis of contracts allows you to determine what they actually say as opposed to what you think they say. That makes sense, but it wasn’t what caught my eye. Instead, I noted this table, which is from Stewart J. Schwab & Randall S. Thomas, … Read More

What U.S. Cities Should I Add to My 2011 “Drafting Clearer Contracts” Dates?

In partnership with West LegalEdcenter, I do an all-day version of my “Drafting Clearer Contracts” seminar in cities throughout the U.S. Click here for the 2010 schedule. (I do seminars in Canada with a different partner, Osgoode Professional Development.) The roster of U.S. cities changes from year to year, with a city or two being added or dropped. We’re currently … Read More

Are Some Terms Too Obvious to Define?

I’m back teaching at Penn Law, working through the chaos that inevitably seems to accompany the first couple of weeks. A sign that we’re getting more focused is that two students each reported an MSCD typo. (Cue author gnashing teeth.) And more to the point, one student asked the first blogworthy question of the semester. We had been discussing integrated versus … Read More

Is Contract Drafting “Deadly”?

This American Lawyer article about the lawyers of the “Forbes 400” reminded me that real-estate developer Sam Zell once said, regarding his first days as a lawyer, “I spent my first week drafting a contract. It was deadly.” (See this WSJ Law Blog item for complete details.) So, is contract drafting deadly? For junior lawyers, it’s unlikely to be a … Read More

LinkedIn Groups: The Wisdom of Crowds, the Tower of Babel

Readers of this blog will be aware that I’m partial to the notion of lobbing questions to a broad and interested readership and seeing what I get by way of a response. So it will come as no surprise that I think LinkedIn groups can be useful. Thus far my involvement in LinkedIn groups has been limited. I’m a member … Read More

Some More BigLaw Seminar Feedback

I’ve previously (in this blog post and this blog post from November 2009) ruminated over the relative dearth of BigLaw associates at my public seminars in the U.S. (Canada is a different matter entirely.) So when some do materialize, it’s a little like a birdwatcher spotting a variegated flycatcher. Last week I held one of my West “Drafting Clearer Contracts” … Read More

Unilaterally Fixing a Signed Contract Is a Bad Idea

Via Above the Law, I learned of this article in the Los Angeles Times. Frank McCourt, owner of the L.A. Dodgers baseball team, is engaged in a scorched-earth divorce battle, and this article details how Larry Silverstein, a lawyer for McCourt, apparently took it upon himself to change one word in a signed contract between McCourt and his wife Jamie: … Read More

“Books and Records”?

Reader Macy Shubak recently asked me the following question: How do you feel about using “books and records” as in “Investor may inspect the Company’s books and records”? I think one or the other of the words can be deleted. It would be better to delete “books,” since “records” is broader. “Records” includes physical and electronic records, whereas “books” sounds like hard … Read More

Working Through the “What Ifs”

A crucial part of drafting any contract is making sure that you’ve worked through the “what ifs”—that you’ve addressed all conceivable scenarios and that nothing has fallen through the cracks. When you’re dealing with a complex transaction, accomplishing that requires specialized expertise and sufficient time and patience to wrestle with lengthy and and intricate documentation. It’s easy to overlook something … Read More

Real Change: Not from the Demand Side or the Supply Side, But from the Outside

When it comes to contract drafting, change is tough. For one thing, it’s precedent-driven. And it’s a team sport—instead of being able to draft in splendid isolation, you may well have to take into account the preferences of others on your side of the transaction, not to mention the preferences of those on the other side. And in the fast-paced … Read More