Month: November 2014

“To Wit” (And Submit Your Favorite Fatuous Archaisms)

During my public “Drafting Clearer Contracts” seminar in New York last Thursday, a participant mentioned the phrase to wit. Here’s what Black’s Law Dictionary has to say about it: to wit (too wit), adv. (14c) Archaic. That is to say; namely <the district attorney amended the complaint to include embezzlement, to wit, “stealing money that the company had entrusted to … Read More

Notes from the Road: Back to London

I’ve just returned from from my third trip to London this year. The first was to speak at a conference; the second was to do an in-house seminar at one of the big English law firms; this time around, it was to do a public “Drafting Clearer Contracts” seminar for the Faculty of Laws of University College London. Here’s how … Read More

How Hard Is MSCD-Compliant Drafting?

This from a reader who is director of legal services at a global company: The problem with a full commitment to adopting MSCD is that it takes a lot of work to get good at it. I’ve spent a lot of time with it—I even outlined, law-school style, the chapter on categories of contract language, to use as a cheat … Read More

Using Words and Digits to State Numbers: A Reminder

Yesterday a reader sent me an extract from a contract, with the following note: I just received a sublease draft from my outside counsel. He was incorporating the default provisions from the Master Lease. It is nice to have a concrete example of how it provides two opportunities to get the number wrong! I figured out what he was trying to do. … Read More

A Suboptimal Variant of Language of Performance

Every so often an issue arises in a topic that I haven’t had occasion to think about in a while. Here’s an instance of that. Check out the following, caught fresh in the EDGAR lagoon (italics added): Buyer is hereby purchasing from the Sellers, and the Sellers are hereby selling to Buyer, free and clear of all Encumbrances, all of the … Read More