Month: May 2015

Revisiting “Agrees That”: It Can Be Worse Than Just Clutter

Routine bits of contract clutter have the potential to create real problems. Baron Oursler, senior counsel at the transportation company FleetPride and one of the participants at last week’s “Drafting Clearer Contracts” seminar in Houston, told me about an amazing example of that. I now pass it on to you, dear reader. The Dispute It involves a dispute between UBS … Read More

“Amongst” and “Whilst”

It’s easy enough to find contracts that use amongst. A search on Westlaw’s version of EDGAR that was limited to items filed in the past three years yielded 4,774 hits. Here are four examples, with those apparently drafted in Commonwealth countries noted with an asterisk: … then the Maximum Indemnification Amount or the balance thereof shall be divided amongst the Office Holders at … Read More

“Between” Versus “Among” When Listing the Parties to a Contract

I was mildly surprised to find that I’ve apparently never written anything on this blog about which to use, between or among, when listing the parties to a contract, in the introductory clause or elsewhere. Here’s what MSCD 2.46–48 has to say: In all cases, use between as the preposition in the introductory clause rather than among or a silly couplet (see 1.42) such as by … Read More

Mark Anderson, Google’s Patent Purchase Agreement, and Public Shaming

If you wish to witness an old-fashioned beatdown, scurry over to the IP Draughts corner of the marketplace of ideas to see Mark Anderson dismantle—Marquess of Queensbury rules!—a Google patent purchase agreement (here). I too am prone to meting out vigilante justice. Go here for my analysis of another Google contract, a services agreement. But it’s a model of professionalism compared … Read More

Variations on “Breach”

Choices in contract drafting come in big and small packages. Today, let’s think small; let’s think breach. Count Noun or Mass Noun? Consider the following: It will not constitute [a breach] [breach] of the Recipient’s obligations under this agreement for the Recipient or any of its Representatives to disclose … Both of the bracketed alternatives work. How so, you ask? Well, … Read More