Month: March 2016

Which Sentence Structure Do You Prefer?

Here are five versions of the same sentence, but with the phrase at its expense positioned differently in each one: 1. At its expense, the Publisher shall send 20 review copies of the Work to individuals named by the Author. 2. The Publisher shall at its expense send 20 review copies of the Work to individuals named by the Author. 3. … Read More

Save the Dates: “Drafting Clearer Contracts” Seminars in Toronto 24 and 25 October 2016

In October I’ll be giving seminars in Toronto for Osgoode Professional Development. On 24 October I’ll be giving my regular “Drafting Clearer Contracts” seminar; on 25 October I’ll be giving my “advanced” seminar entitled “An Intensive Program in the Categories of Contract Language.” As soon as more information is available, I’ll add a link to the “Public Seminars” page of this site.

“Look To”

This post on ContractsProf Blog by Myanna Dellinger begins as follows: If a recording artist enters into a personal services agreement with a record company that, among other things, contains a promise that the artist will “look solely to [a corporate version of the music band] for the payment of my fees and/or royalties … and will not assert any … Read More

The G-Word

In my post on no-reliance language (here), I link to this blog post by Glenn West. In it, Glenn doesn’t mess about. He mentions me right off the bat. And he drops the G-bomb. That’s right—guru. It’s a label that has stuck with me, probably thanks to this 2007 article in the Canadian periodical The Lawyers Weekly. I’m OK with … Read More

The Latest from Glenn West on No-Reliance Language

Glenn West blogs. He has also grown a hipster beard and moved to Brooklyn. Actually, that last bit isn’t true. But he did recently contribute this post to Weil Gotshal’s Global Private Equity Watch blog. It’s about the recent decision of the Delaware Court of Chancery in FdG Logistics LLC v. A&R Logistics Holdings, Inc., to the effect that a disclaimer of reliance … Read More

English Website “The Lawyer” Has My Article on Contract Drafting and Young Lawyers

You can now find on the English website “The Lawyer” my squib The problem with contract drafting and what young lawyers can do about it. It speaks for itself. (Free registration required.) I’ve been vocal over the past couple of years in suggesting that the English legal profession has bollixed important aspects of contract interpretation. So far, that has elicited some sputtering … Read More

Changing Contract Legalese: My Response to Keith Lee

Keith Lee is the lawyer behind the blog Associate’s Mind. He’s also author of The Marble and the Sculptor, a book for law students, but that’s beside the point, because what’s on my mind is his most recent blog post. It’s entitled “Should Lawyers Ditch Legalese?” It mentions my recent Beyoncé-inspired post, but I stuck around to read his recommendations on … Read More

Another Syntactic-Ambiguity Cautionary Tale (As If We Really Needed One): The Supreme Court’s Opinion in Lockhart

Here we go again. You might recall that syntactic ambiguity involves uncertainty over what part of a sentence a phrase modifies, or what part of a phrase a word modifies. If you want a whole bunch of examples of syntactic ambiguity, just search for “syntactic” on this blog. Well, the most recent Supreme Court opinion, Lockhart v. U.S. (opinion PDF … Read More