Month: July 2016

Update on My “Advanced” Categories-of-Contract-Language Seminar

My core seminar is the “Drafting Clearer Contracts” seminar. I’ve been doing it for, oh, eleven years, as both public and in-house seminars. I do more of them with each passing year. It’s humming along nicely. I’ve also started doing another seminar. The marketing materials describe it as “advanced,” but the more specific part of the title is “An Intensive Program in … Read More

Defining “Knowledge” to Include What Someone Should Have Known

Starting at 13.364, MSCD considers the elements that go into a definition of the defined term Knowledge. One element that discussion doesn’t include is the possibility of Knowledge being defined to include information that the person in question should have known. That’s knows as “constructive knowledge,” and it features in the following definitions exhumed from the potter’s field EDGAR. “Knowledge” … Read More

“Aforesaid” and “Aforementioned”

You recall my recent post about the foregoing (here)? Well, suppress your gag reflex and meet its close relatives, aforesaid and aforementioned. The word aforesaid comes in two flavors. First, it occurs in the phrase as aforesaid: Each such notice, request or other communication shall be effective (i) if given by mail, 72 hours after such communication is deposited in the … Read More

Spare Us the Legalistic BS: I Respond to an Item on “Above the Law”

Last Friday I noticed this post on Above the Law. It’s by Stefan Savic, an associate at the law firm Balestriere Fariello. The title is Legalese: Won’t Do With It, Can’t Do Without It. According to Savic, traditional contract legalese is impenetrable. He says that although lawyers have been encouraged to use plain English, “the day-to-day legal universe has been slow to move … Read More

Fine-Tuning LexCheck (Featuring “Promptly”)

In this post I reminded you all that I’m involved with LexCheck, the contract-checking software. Part of the challenge in developing LexCheck has been determining what we tell the software to do. For one thing, I’m acutely aware that there’s a difference between your electing to consult A Manual of Style for Contract Drafting and my blog posts and my … Read More

An Update on LexCheck, the Contract-Checking Software

[Updated 4 April 2018: I’m no longer an advisor to LexCheck (formerly Lit IQ), and the last time I did any work for them was in 2016.] You know the 1950s movie Forbidden Planet. No? You should check it out—it’s an odd mix of retro camp and legit eeriness. In any event, the plot of the movie involves—spoiler alert!—technology that’s … Read More

“Is Permitted”

There’s no end to the suboptimal alternatives to may. Here’s another—is permitted. You see is permitted to when a party is the subject of the sentence or clause: … Sponsor is permitted to assign this Agreement in connection with a merger or a sale or transfer of substantially all of its assets … … neither the Seller nor the Purchaser shall … Read More