Month: April 2017

I Sound Off on Georgia’s Campus-Carry Bill

Go here for a clip run on WABE 90.1 FM, the Atlanta public radio station, and the related article. They’re about lines 37 and 38 of Georgia’s HB 280, a bill that would allow guns on campus at Georgia’s public colleges and universities. You hear me for a big ten seconds. Here’s the language at issue: Not apply to faculty, staff, … Read More

Thoughts on Contract Interpretation

Go here for an article I posted on LinkedIn today, Be Afraid of Contract Interpretation. Every so often I post a particularly general piece on LinkedIn instead of on this blog, with the notion that something on LinkedIn might catch the attention of people who would never have heard of me otherwise. What I have to say on LinkedIn will generally … Read More

Don’t Bother Saying that the Parties Accept the Terms of a Contract

Here are two concluding clauses: The authorized signatures for MICHIGAN and COMPANY below signify their acceptance of the terms of this AGREEMENT. IN WITNESS WHEREOF, the parties have indicated their acceptance of the terms of this Agreement by their signatures below on the dates indicated. In both these concluding clauses, the parties say they’re accepting the terms of the contract. … Read More

MSCD4 Now in Production

I just sent my minder at the American Bar Association the manuscript for the fourth edition of A Manual of Style for Contract Drafting. All I can say is EXPLETIVE DELETED. It took about four months to weave a mass of disparate writings into the text of the third edition, then sand and polish the whole so the seams don’t … Read More

Save the Dates: Toronto Seminars on 23 & 24 October 2017

On 23 October I’ll be in Toronto to do a “Drafting Clearer Contracts” seminar for Osgoode Professional Development. I’ll follow that on 24 October with my “advanced” seminar entitled “An Intensive Program in the Categories of Contract Language.” To keep it action-packed, it will be shorter than previous versions of this seminar, running from 9:00 a.m. to 12:30 p.m. Go … Read More

Stating the Part of Speech of a Defined Term

An autonomous definition might refer to the part of speech of the defined term. If it does, invariably it’s because one or more related forms of that defined term are used in that contract and are treated as defined terms too. Here are four examples: “Transfer” means, when used as a noun, any voluntary or involuntary, direct or indirect (whether through … Read More

My Advice to a Frustrated Reader

Here’s what a reader said to me in an email: I’m frustrated. Even though I’ve been a lawyer for 21 years, my contract drafting skills are not what they should be for a lawyer with my experience. For example, I’m drafting a termination agreement for a consulting services agreement. A friend and I briefly discussed what should be in it. … Read More

How Come I Have Fun at My Seminars?

Last week I did three gigs in three days. On Tuesday, at the request of cousin Joshua Stein, I did a one-hour presentation in New York as part of a seminar on real-estate financing. On Wednesday and Thursday, I did two day-long in-house “Drafting Clearer Contracts” seminars in the Bay Area. And at each of the three, I had … … Read More

“Excluding Without Limitation”

A reader asked me about excluding without limitation. Yes, it’s a thing, unfortunately, or at least enough of a thing to prompt me to look into it. It occurs in 55 contracts filed on the SEC’s EDGAR system in the past year. I’ve included at the bottom of this post extracts from some of those contracts. I don’t understand excluding … Read More