Archive for August, 2007



Another Helping of Syntactic Ambiguity

Thursday, August 30th, 2007

My email in-box is overflowing with emails from Lexis notifying me of cases ostensibly relating to ambiguity. I fished from the torrent the following straightforward example of syntactic ambiguity. (Syntactic ambiguity arises out of the order in which words appear and how they relate to each other.) It’s from Active Zones of America, LLC v. [...]

What to Call Contracts You Base a New Contract On

Thursday, August 30th, 2007

I’ve intermittently pondered what to call the contracts one copies, in whole or in part, when drafting a new contract. Contracts Prepared for Use in Future Transactions First, consider those contracts that are prepared for use in future transactions and so contain blanks, placeholders, and perhaps suitable annotations. What should they be called? Did you [...]

Adams Op-Ed Article in the Globe and Mail—”Behind the Scenes of the Comma Dispute”

Tuesday, August 28th, 2007

The Globe and Mail (the Canadian newspaper) has published my op-ed piece “>Behind the Scense of the Comma Dispute.” I hope you enjoy it!

“On the One Hand … On the Other Hand”

Tuesday, August 21st, 2007

Once more, I doff my cap to a reader of this blog. Steve Pappas—a Penn Law classmate—suggested to me that the construction on the one hand … on the other hand is often misused. It had never crossed my mind to investigate this usage. I’ve now done so, and I agree with Steve. The construction [...]

Litigators Drafting Contracts?

Tuesday, August 21st, 2007

I recently encountered this article about drafting a mediation settlement agreement. The fact that it was published by the Section of Litigation of the ABA reminded me that many litigators apparently dabble in contract drafting in order to draft settlement agreements. I find that a slightly scary notion, as the technical nature of contract drafting [...]

Rogers Victory in the Comma Case

Monday, August 20th, 2007

Today the Canadian Radio-television and Telecommunications Commission released a decision in the famous “comma case.” Click here for a copy of the decision. (You may recall that I acted as expert for Rogers Communications Inc. in this dispute; click here for my most recent post on this dispute.) This time the Commission sided with Rogers. [...]

Features Added to AdamsDrafting Blog

Thursday, August 16th, 2007

I’ve belatedly added a couple of features to this blog. If you wish to inform someone of a post, as an alternative to emailing them a link you can now click on the “Email this Post” link at the end of the post, fill in the blanks, and click “Mail It!” And you can generate [...]

New NYLJ Article on Materiality

Thursday, August 16th, 2007

Today’s issue of the New York Law Journal contains my article Revisiting Materiality. Click here for a pdf reprint; it’s also available on the GC New York website (free registration required). This article discusses how the word material—that favorite of deal lawyers—is ambiguous, and it suggests ways of addressing this problem. This is a topic [...]

ABA 2007 Annual Meeting (Including My Panel-Discussion Materials)

Sunday, August 12th, 2007

I had originally had in mind some sort of journalistic report on my “How to Write Better Business Documents” panel discussion and other goings-on at the ABA’s 2007 annual meeting in San Francisco. But I’ve recovered my sanity and concluded that any such account would be infernally dull and indiscreet—an unpromising combination. So I’ll limit [...]

“I Particularly Do Not Enjoy … Contracts”

Sunday, August 12th, 2007

A reader alerted me to this post on Above the Law. It’s about a letter that a Big Law corporate associate sent to his firm explaining exactly why he was pleased to be leaving the profession. Here’s the pertinent bit: I do not enjoy the practice of law. At all. I find it extremely tedious [...]

More on Retrieving and Using Contracts Filed with the SEC

Sunday, August 12th, 2007

In this December 2006 post I discussed ways of retrieving contracts that have been filed on the U.S. Securities and Exchange Commission’s EDGAR system. In a comment I mentioned an additional source, RealDealDocs, but noted that I hadn’t kicked their tires. Well, I still haven’t, because I’m happy doing my own searches (for free) on [...]

A Contract-Drafting Pop Quiz for Lawyers

Monday, August 6th, 2007

Are you a lawyer? Do you draft contracts? Do you have other people draft contracts for you? Yes? Then I have a pop quiz for you. Consider the following questions: Does the phrase representations and warranties determine the remedies available to a contract party? When you draft contracts, do you include a traditional recital of [...]

Reminder: Wydick, Garner, and Adams to Speak at ABA Annual Meeting

Monday, August 6th, 2007

As I mentioned in this post, this coming Friday, August 10th, from 2:30PM to 4:30PM, Dick Wydick, Bryan Garner, and I will be speaking at the ABA annual meeting in San Francisco. The topic is “How to Write Better Business Documents.” Some promotional materials gave as the title of this session “The Art of Persuasive [...]

More on Needless Elaboration

Monday, August 6th, 2007

[Revised August 8, 2007] I’ve previously blogged about how drafters often refer to a given set, then refer to subsets that compose all or part of that set, even though there’s no question as to the boundaries of that set. I’ve decided to call this phenomenon “needless elaboration.” It’s like saying “I don’t eat fish, [...]

Deal Lawyers and Litigators—Two Cultures?

Monday, August 6th, 2007

I just read “The Billable Hour Must Die,” an article by Scott Turow in the August 2007 issue of the ABA Journal. The following paragraph caught my eye: The people writing contracts were, in my youthful view, not much different from consultants. Although I have learned to love and appreciate hundreds of transactional lawyers in [...]