Bringing Outside Lawyers into the Law School

I made it a point to have outside lawyers play a part in my course at Notre Dame Law School. I don’t know from pedagogy, so …

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Contract Drafting: Art or Science? (I Thought of It First!)

This post by Mark Anderson last week used the title I had planned on using for a post of my own. Rather than launch a …

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Pomposity in Drafting, Part Deux: “The Executive”

As one of their assignments, students taking my course at Notre Dame Law School drafted an employment agreement. Necessarily, I prepared one too. I based it on something …

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Pomposity in Drafting, Part One: “Attorneys’ Fees”

Don’t worry, this isn’t a discussion about where to put the apostrophe in attorneys’ fees. (But, yes, it goes after the s, to avoid getting …

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“Nor Shall”

As one of their assignments, last week my students at Notre Dame Law School analyzed the verb structures in the “SOW terms & conditions agreement” that goes …

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“Business Efforts”?

Greetings from South Bend, Indiana! I’m in the middle of teaching an “intensive” three-week course on contract drafting at Notre Dame Law School. Given that …

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Dates for My 2015 U.S. “Drafting Clearer Contracts” Seminars

Here’s a list of where and when in 2015 I’ll be doing public “Drafting Clearer Contracts” seminars in the U.S. for West LegalEdcenter: March 19, …

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How I Go About Creating Templates for Clients (Plus a Testimonial)

In previous years, I’ve occasionally moaned on this blog about how I wasn’t getting as many drafting projects as I thought I should. Well, I’m doing …

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Second Edition of “The Structure of M&A Contracts” Being Considered

Remember my ebook The Structure of M&A Contracts? Me neither, almost. It has been available only on the Thomson Reuters ProView app. Because of various problems—for …

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LegalSifter: Another Service that Aims to Tell You What’s in Your Contracts

Via this post on Profit and Laws, I learned about LegalSifter. LegalSifter’s website offers very little information. More informative is this piece on TechCrunch: Using …

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“Fair”

I’ve previously considered reasonableness and good faith. (See MSCD 13.557 and this 2011 post.) Now it’s time to think about fairness. Just to set the …

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A Tip For All You Cross-Reference Ninjas

This post explains how to edit a cross-reference to a contract article so that the a in article is lowercase. Chris Lemens, this one’s for …

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Using Technology to Assess a Law-School Contract-Drafting Assignment

I noticed this post last week on ContractsProf Blog. It’s about an online contract-drafting exercise developed by Zev Eigen of Northwestern Law School. It appears …

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Some Information About Formatting Used in the Showcase Template

The showcase NDA template (here) uses the enumeration scheme recommended in my book A Manual of Style for Contract Drafting. But another feature of the …

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What Happens When You Eat the Fruit of the Tree of Contract-Drafting Knowledge

This week I received the following message from lawyer Tim Gilmore: I’ve been following you several years. You’re on the right track. But I’m frustrated. Ten years ago …

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Silent-Auction Item: For a Teenager in Your Life, Five Hours of One-on-One Coaching in Clear Writing by Yours Truly

My wife Joanne recently became executive director of the Belmont Child Care Association. BCCA operates a preschool program for children of workers in New York’s thoroughbred …

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Crowdsourced Mediocrity Is Still Mediocrity

I periodically do my best to dump cold water on the notion that one can crowdsource quality contract language. I did so in this 2010 post, in this …

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When the 10b-5 Representation Goes Walkabout

You know 10b-5 representations, right? (Because 10b-5 representation is a term of art, I’ll let slide use of the word representation.) Here’s one from an …

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“May” Can Mean “Might,” But I Sleep Well at Night Anyway

May can mean might, but I don’t think that’s any reason for me to stop recommending that you use may as the workhorse for language …

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The Problem with “Curing” Breach (Updated)

Updated August 9, 2014: Comments by Harley Meyer have prompted me to update this post. Harley makes a couple of points. He focuses on the …

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“Tend”

Consider the verb tend. It means “regularly or frequently behave in a particular way or have a certain characteristic; be liable to possess or display (a …

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Don’t Fear the Showcase Template

Recently I had a chat with the general counsel of a technology company. We discussed whether it would make sense for the company to overhaul …

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Where’s Ken?, Fall 2014 Edition

With the summer lull about to end, I’m planning my fall travels. I’ve listed below the trips I currently have planned. If a given trip is …

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“Shall Not … Unless” Versus “May … Only If”

Last week I saw this tweet by @lisasolomon: @KonciseD Agreement also uses "shall not…unless" construction instead of "may…only if." Keep fighting the good fight, Ken! …

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Termination for Breach: What Standard to Use?

It’s commonplace for contracts to provide that a party may terminate for “material breach” by the other party. I’m not keen on that standard: as longtime readers …

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Language of Concurrence?

There’s this: On signing this agreement, the Sponsor is paying Acme $500,000 by check toward the cost of developing the Program. I do believe that what …

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“Inure”

Do I really have to say it? OK, here goes: inure (meaning “to take effect; to come into use”) is lame. You might know inure from “successors …

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Making Liquidated Damages Optional?

Because he happened to cite one of my posts on the subject, I came across this post on liquidated damages by Virginia litigator Lee Berlik. It …

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An Update on Retrieving Contracts from the SEC’s EDGAR System

For data nerds, recent years have seen relentless progress. More! Better! Cheaper! But that’s not the case for one subgroup—contract nerds. Many moons ago (2006), I wrote …

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A Possible Exception to the Rule that You Put Autonomous Definitions in Alphabetical Order

Warning: The following is for serious defined-term geeks only. MSCD 6.18 says, “Put any set of autonomous definitions in alphabetical order.” I’d like now to …

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Getting Right the Temporal Aspect of Adjective Clauses

Consider the following, which relates to the consequences of Acme’s cancelling a purchase of equipment: Acme shall reimburse the Vendor for reasonable expenses that the …

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The Drafter’s Fear of the Missing Provision: Malaysia Airlines’ Insurance Coverage

Although the way I’ve chosen to earn my living has its challenges (like any other), there’s one aspect of law-firm life that I don’t miss: …

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When People Fight Over Clear Language

Reader Vance Koven prodded me to look at this post by Marianna Brown Bettman on her blog Legally Speaking Ohio (via this post on ContractsProf …

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Now Available for Free: My Webcast on Drafting and Reviewing Confidentiality Agreements

It’s West LegalEdcenter’s sensible policy to pull webcasts after a couple of years. It follows that they’re no longer offering the “Drafting and Reviewing Confidentiality Agreements” webcast that …

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“Wherefore”

So, how long have I been doing this? About fourteen years? Well then, how come it has taken me this long to write about wherefore? Excuse …

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Contract Automation: Charting a Course Between Fabulists and Traditionalists

A couple of weeks ago I saw this article in City Journal, a U.S. quarterly, by John O. McGinnis, a professor in constitutional law at …

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An Instance of Undue Generality in the NFL’s Collective Bargaining Agreement

I was vaguely aware of news accounts of the contract travails of Jimmy Graham, a player for the American football team the New Orleans Saints. …

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English Contract Drafters Should Consider Using “Efforts” Instead of “Endeavours”

Generally, English contracts refer to endeavours rather than efforts. I’ve long waged a guerilla campaign against the conventional wisdom that different endeavours standards convey different …

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Malpractice Claim Against Cadwalader: Defining What You Mean, Not What You Don’t Mean

A New York appellate court recently unanimously affirmed a judgment of $17.2 million against the law firm Cadwalader, Wickersham & Taft in a legal malpractice action …

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You Can Now Register for my London, Seoul, Tokyo, and Singapore Seminars

Go here to register for my 3 November “Drafting Clearer Contracts” seminar in London, hosted by University College London. Go here to register for my …

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“Resiliate” (A Québec Usage)

Michael Fleming, ur-commenter on this blog, sent me the following extract from a Canadian lease, asking me what I thought of “resiliate”: Should the Tenant …

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Revisiting “Provided That”

The last time I had anything to say about provided that on this blog was in this 2008 post. Well, today I was woken from …

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The Challenges of Document Assembly and How to Overcome Them

Here are some thoughts I put together for the recent IACCM “ask the expert” call that I did with Tim Allen, Business Integrity’s vice president–North …

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Off-Topic: My Version of an Email Confidentiality Notice

(This is the first post in a new category, “Off-Topic.” Any post in that category will have nothing to do with contract drafting. Don’t worry, …

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An Organization to Promote the Teaching of Contract Drafting?

During my visit to the biennial conference of the Legal Writing Institute, I saw that although their focus remains litigation writing, an increasing number of …

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My Remarks on Receiving the Golden Pen Award

Yesterday I attended the biennial conference of the Legal Writing Institute, where I received the 2014 Golden Pen Award. My thanks to LWI members in …

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When Entire-Agreement Provisions and Click-Wraps (or Browse-Wraps) Collide

Occasionally I offer up an inquiry from a reader and step aside. This is one of those occasions. Blake Reagan is a lawyer who works as …

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Ambiguity Caused by Negation Followed by Causation in Conditional Clauses

Consider the following: If I don’t go to the movies because of your nagging … It conveys two possible meanings: If your nagging causes me …

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“Person”

The inimitable A. Wright Burke, M. Phil., added to this recent post on the word anyone the following comment (here): People are entities! There are natural entities …

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What Does It Mean to Enter into a Contract “With” Someone?

I was pleased that Mack Sperling, who maintains the blog North Carolina Business Litigation Report, told me about this post on his blog. It discusses …

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