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The Tortoise, the Hare, and Different Speeds of Mental Function

The other day I had a chat with a BigLaw senior associate. He operates at a very high clock rate: he rattled off various doctrinal propositions that were foreign to me, and he suggested analogies to this, that, and the other. It was all rather over my head. But I’m fine with that, because I’ve long recognized that people’s minds can … Read More

Why It’s Important to Police Your Defined Terms

I know only too well that if you draft a contract of any length and complexity, keeping track of the defined terms can be a challenge. It’s easy to find yourself using terms you don’t define, defining terms you don’t use, and using different defined terms to convey the same meaning. Thanks to Cousin Joshua, I learned about Wells Fargo … Read More

Seeking Objective Signs of Progress

I see plenty of signs of increasing interest in rational contract language. For one thing, people keep buying MSCD in healthy numbers, and I find appreciative readers in all sorts of place. But how about objective evidence that people are choosing to follow MSCD‘s recommendations? Well, here’s a little test I ran. I searched that great manure lagoon, the SEC’s EDGAR … Read More

Feedback from Participants at My University College London Seminar

I described in this post how I had been a little nervous about how I’d be received in England. Well, the initial feedback from participants at my seminar for University College London suggests that I needn’t have worried too much. Here’s a sample: Ken’s personality and enthusiasm made the course. It has been a long time since I enjoyed a … Read More

Bringing Kaizen to the Contract Process

I noted with interest this article in the New Yorker by James Surowiecki. It’s about how a focus on incremental gains, in sports and elsewhere, has led to a “performance revolution.” It begins by describing how a “technological and analytical arms race is producing the best athletes in history,” but it goes on to describe similarly dramatic improvements in performance … Read More

“To Wit” (And Submit Your Favorite Fatuous Archaisms)

During my public “Drafting Clearer Contracts” seminar in New York last Thursday, a participant mentioned the phrase to wit. Here’s what Black’s Law Dictionary has to say about it: to wit (too wit), adv. (14c) Archaic. That is to say; namely <the district attorney amended the complaint to include embezzlement, to wit, “stealing money that the company had entrusted to … Read More

Notes from the Road: Back to London

I’ve just returned from from my third trip to London this year. The first was to speak at a conference; the second was to do an in-house seminar at one of the big English law firms; this time around, it was to do a public “Drafting Clearer Contracts” seminar for the Faculty of Laws of University College London. Here’s how … Read More

How Hard Is MSCD-Compliant Drafting?

This from a reader who is director of legal services at a global company: The problem with a full commitment to adopting MSCD is that it takes a lot of work to get good at it. I’ve spent a lot of time with it—I even outlined, law-school style, the chapter on categories of contract language, to use as a cheat … Read More

Using Words and Digits to State Numbers: A Reminder

Yesterday a reader sent me an extract from a contract, with the following note: I just received a sublease draft from my outside counsel. He was incorporating the default provisions from the Master Lease. It is nice to have a concrete example of how it provides two opportunities to get the number wrong! I figured out what he was trying to do. … Read More

A Suboptimal Variant of Language of Performance

Every so often an issue arises in a topic that I haven’t had occasion to think about in a while. Here’s an instance of that. Check out the following, caught fresh in the EDGAR lagoon (italics added): Buyer is hereby purchasing from the Sellers, and the Sellers are hereby selling to Buyer, free and clear of all Encumbrances, all of the … Read More