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Treating “This Agreement” as a Defined Term Is Silly

I’ve written about the defined term this Agreement more often than I might have expected. (See for example this 2018 blog post and this 2016 blog post.) Yet here I am writing about it again, because I’d like to have in one place all my arguments on the subject, including one I’ve articulated only recently—what’s under the heading “An Explanation.” … Read More

ISO 24495-2: ISO Makes a Wrong Turn into Legal Writing

In August 2025, ISO (the International Organization for Standardization) published ISO 24495-2:2025 (Plain language — Part 2: Legal communication). Here’s how ISO describes ISO 24495-2: This document deals with legal communication, and it builds on the foundation for plain language in ISO 24495-1. It establishes guidelines and techniques to help authors make sure that readers can readily understand legal communication … Read More

More on Time Zones and References to Time in Contracts

One of the joys of scholarship is that it offers plenty of opportunity for you to be a doofus. I’ve taken advantage of that over the years. It goes with the territory: if your scholarship is worth anything, it will venture into the unknown (unknown to you, at least), and the unknown is where you stumble. My most recent opportunity … Read More

Changes Made to the Second Printing of the Fifth Edition of MSCD!

File this under “Better late than never.” Way late. The second printing of A Manual of Style for Contract Drafting came out in spring 2024. If you have a copy of the first printing, you might want to note in it changes I made to the second printing. Here they are: As changes go, I think we can say they’re … Read More

MSCD Still Has Value as a Credential

The image below is from my repost of a LinkedIn post by Chris Lemens, who has been reading my stuff for as long as I have written stuff. What prompted my repost was two comments Chris added to this LinkedIn post by Nada Alnajafi: So Chris makes it explicit—the simplest way to demonstrate your value to Chris would be to … Read More

On-Demand “Drafting Clearer Contracts” Training: Sign Up for News!

My notion of offering an on-demand module of my Drafting Clearer Contracts training is slowly shifting from a gleam in my eye to reality. Videos and Quizzes This module will consist of 200+ short videos, some proportion of them accompanied by automated quizzes. The foundation of Drafting Clearer Contracts training is my book A Manual of Style for Contract Drafting. … Read More

The Form Is Copy-and-Pasted, and So Is Everything Else: Thoughts Prompted by Chowdhury, Chudkowski & Gulati

Recently I encountered this law review article: Tara Chowdhury, Faith Chudkowski & Mitu Gulati, The Form Knows Best, 79 U. of Miami L. Rev. 607 (2025). In this post, I explain two quibbles. I also suggest that the reality the authors describe is better explained by copy-and-pasting, as opposed to being driven by forms. The Article In their article, Chowdhury, … Read More

A Note from a Grateful Reader, and My Reply

The image below contains the text of an email message I received from a law student yesterday. In case it’s of interest, here’s how I responded: Hi [Name]. Fortunate is the author who gets this sort of message from a reader! Now that you’re on the road to being an informed consumer of contract language, I offer the following suggestions: … Read More