Recently I had occasion to revisit an issue I thought long settled. Because it involves reader comprehension generally, I took the liberty of buttonholing people involved in legal writing but not contract drafting. Here’s what I asked them: Below are two sentences. The second is the definition of a key defined term used in the first. Necessarily, one has to come … Read More
My enumeration schemes are an important part of my repertoire. There’s the one in MSCD, then there’s the hanging-indent scheme I unleashed in this 2015 post. But despite my control-freakery, I’ve not paid a lot of attention to two aspects of my scheme, namely point size and spacing. I went with the Word default, which was then Calibri 11 point, … Read More
In this 2014 post I described what seemed an oddity: putting the defined-term parenthetical at the beginning of the definition. Well, I think that with some tweaking it can be turned into a legitimate technique. Here’s how I’ve just described it in something I’m working on: If you put the defined-term parenthetical at the end of a list of items and … Read More
In this post I discuss how archaisms such as witnesseth arose more than five hundred years ago. Why do they persist? Because transactions are a precedent-driven part of a conservative profession: when it’s time to do a new transaction, it makes sense to reach for contracts used in other, previous transactions. There’s also an element of incantation involved: the law … Read More
Tired of the moral degeneracy on prolific display in civic life in the United States? Then I invite you to take refuge in old contracts. Really old contracts. The urge to flaunt in contracts, in all capitals, the archaisms witnesseth, whereas, now therefore, and in witness whereof goes back a long way. That’s why they’re called archaisms! But I wanted … Read More
So ends another year on the blog, a year during which 967,730 people have visited the site so far. That’s a lot of visits. Here are the ten posts (from whatever year) people visited most in 2016, with the most-visited at the top: Using the Terms “Negligence” and “Gross Negligence” in a Contract “Effective Date” The Apostrophe in “Five Days’ … Read More
Once or twice a month I send to my 3,000 subscribers a newsletter containing not only links to recent blog posts but also musings about whatever happens to have popped into my brain. I’m under no illusions that my newsletters make for gripping reading, but what the heck: in an end-of-the-year, end-of-civilization spirit, here, in reverse chronological order, are links … Read More
Today I encountered use of ought in the Uniform Commercial Code, so that sent me scurrying to EDGAR, where I found 143 contracts filed in the past year that use ought. Garner’s Modern English Usage says the following about ought: Ought should be reserved for expressions of necessity, duty, or obligation; should, the slightly weaker but more usual word, especially … Read More
Here’s one of my recent tweets: Tonight's clunky contract usage: (sub)licensees. You may now resume your normal programming. — Ken Adams (@AdamsDrafting) December 13, 2016 I followed it up with this one: Anyone think of another instance of parentheses being used like this? Only example I know of is "(s)" to express the concept "one or more". https://t.co/qg8Nn1MCCq — Ken … Read More
Behold the following sentence: If as part of resolving a dispute a party is required to pay the other party, it must no more than 15 days after the dispute was resolved pay the other party the amount in question, plus interest from the beginning of the [day] [date] the disputed payment was originally due through the [day] [date] before … Read More
