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Apparently Some of You Don’t Always Agree with Me

[Updated 9 March 2021] Recently a handful  of people have in passing expressed to me the same sentiment: they don’t always agree with me. Given how often I hear this, I’ve long thought that my epitaph should be, “People didn’t always agree with him.” It seems pointless simply to tell me that you don’t always agree with me. What am I supposed … Read More

Off-Topic: Do Our International-Law Documents Have to Be This Badly Written?

Normally I don’t comment publicly on any kind of writing other than that contained in contracts. I have my hands full as it is. But I was on the receiving end of a cry of despair on Twitter: An example or really lame legalese. Who writes these things @KonciseD ? https://t.co/ukofrUMgiY — Winstonian Smith (@W1nstonian) September 3, 2016 Here’s what … Read More

Whistleblower Immunity: Supplementing in Accordance with the Defend Trade Secrets Act Contracts that Require Employees or Contractors to Keep Information Confidential

Because (@FlemingMF) posted on my blog way back in the early days, I’ve been in the habit of referring to him as “the ur-commenter.” But since I’m perhaps one of 227 people in this country familiar with use of ur– as a prefix, I’ve decided that “Commenter Zero” is a better moniker. Wear it with pride, Michael. In any event, for … Read More

Why I No Longer Use the Term “Contracts Professional”

I’ve been prone to using the phrase contracts professional as a way to refer collectively to (1) lawyers who work with contracts and (2) contract managers. But I’m not keen on the term. When used as a noun, the word professional is slippery. In its narrowest sense, it’s used to refer to those who work in fields that require some sort of certification—lawyers, … Read More

Coming to Indianapolis on 22 September

As part of my constant travels over the next three months—dubbed by me Seminarpalooza—I’m going to Indianapolis, to do a public “Drafting Clearer Contracts” seminar on Thursday, 22 September. For more information, go here. For a sample agenda, go here. For some testimonials, go here. Why mention Indianapolis? Why not focus on … Helsinki! Singapore! Sydney! For one thing, going overseas … Read More

Applying Broken-Windows Theory to Contract Drafting

Are you familiar with broken-windows theory? Here’s the gist of it from the 1982 article in The Atlantic that introduced the theory: Social psychologists and police officers tend to agree that if a window in a building is broken and is left unrepaired, all the rest of the windows will soon be broken. This is as true in nice neighborhoods … Read More

“Directly”

The word directly comes in handy if you want to say in a contract that a party is allowed to do something, or is prohibited from doing something, directly or indirectly. Some examples from the Berkeley Pit that is EDGAR: Executive shall not directly or indirectly render any services of a business, commercial, or professional nature to any other person … … Read More

Notes from the Road: South Bend, Indiana

So here I am in South Bend, Indiana, teaching for the third time an “intensive” course in contract drafting at Notre Dame Law School, the aim being to fit a semester-long course into three weeks. Why am I here? Well, because the law school asked me. And given my peripatetic ways, parachuting in to South Bend for a brief stay … Read More

A Reminder That Sometimes You Can Use Different Categories of Contract Language to Address an Issue

I’m back at Notre Dame Law School, teaching an intensive course in contract drafting—one semester crammed into just under three weeks. As usual, the categories of contract language—my term for how verb structures determine function—is taking a lot of our time. To help my students become familiar with this topic, we looked at some problematic sentences and considered alternatives with more … Read More