You can find on ContractsProf Blog two reviews of the third edition of A Manual of Style for Contract Drafting. Go here for a review by Daniel D. Barnhizer, professor at Michigan State University College of Law, and go here for a review by Irma S. Russell, dean and professor at the University of Montana School of Law.
In this teaser post mentioning the reviews, the blog’s editor, Jeremy Telman, expressed the hope that some readers of the book would chime in. I invite you to do so.