Using Only Words to State Numbers?

Over the years, I’ve written plenty about the practice of expressing numbers using both words and digits, as in five (5) days’ notice.

In MSCD, I recommend using words for one through ten and digits for 11 and up (with some obvious exceptions). I also discuss using only digits. (Go here for an extract of the relevant pages.) But I’ve never considered using only words!

Thanks to this LinkedIn post by Nick Bullard revisiting using both words and digits, it’s clear that some people think using only words is the way to go. Commenter Christof Grofcsik says here, “So, if you’re dropping the [words-and-digits] convention, you should drop the numbers not the words. Much easier to make an error or counterfeit the numbers than the words.”

Does using only words offer any advantages over using only digits? Christof says it reduces the risk of an error in stating the number in question. Christof must be referring to typos that result in a number having one or more digits too many or too few, or a number using one or more digits that are the wrong digit, or a number with the decimal point in the wrong place. (Here’s the definition of typo offered by The Free Dictionary: “An error while inputting text via keyboard, made despite the fact that the user knows exactly what to type in. This usually results from the operator’s inexperience at keyboarding, rushing, not paying attention, or carelessness.”)

Such typos do happen. For example, in a mortgage prepared in New York in 1986, the principal amount was erroneously stated as $92,885 rather than $92,885,000. The result was “a spate of litigation, hundreds of thousands of dollars in legal fees, millions of dollars in damages and an untold fortune in embarrassment.” David Margolick, At the Bar; How Three Missing Zeros Brought Red Faces and Cost
Millions of Dollars
, N.Y. Times, 4 Oct. 1991.

Here’s another example, to the opposite effect, from this 2010 post on Footnoted: In an exhibit to an employment agreement filed on the U.S. Securities and Exchange Commission’s EDGAR system, the company undertook that in addition to paying the executive’s moving expenses, “in consideration of other relocation expenses that Executive and his family will incur, $87,500,000 will be paid upon the Effective Date of the Agreement and $87,500000 will be paid upon final relocation to Atlanta, Georgia.” The intended figure was $87,500.

But for some perspective, two points. First, using only words to express numbers might protect against typos, but it doesn’t protect against making plain old mistakes. For example, see this 2017 blog post about a severance agreement that provided for $2,747,400 in severance pay instead of the $80,805.97 that the parties had previously agreed on. The error arose because the company’s HR person put in the contract the total amount of severance when they should have put in the amount per week. The result was that the total severance amount was 34 times what it should have been. The HR person didn’t make a typo; they made a mistake.

And second, it appears that typos don’t often affect numbers used in contracts, at least not in a way that’s newsworthy: the two examples I cite above are the only examples I’ve encountered in 19 years of blogging about misadventures in contract drafting.

By contrast, the downside to using only words is extreme. Whatever authority on English usage you consult, the convention is to use words for small numbers, then switch to digits. If you ignore that convention, instead of saying, for example, 3,577 shares, you end up saying three-thousand five-hundred and seventy-seven shares. Instead of 60 days, you say sixty days. Instead of 45%, you say forty-five percent. Instead of $11,486.32, you say eleven-thousand four-hundred and eighty-six dollars and thirty-two cents.

Considered individually, some of those examples are more annoying than others. Scribendi, a provider of editing and proofreading services, says here, regarding the convention that you start with words then switch to digits, “The reason for this is relatively intuitive. Writing out large numbers not only wastes space but could also be a major distraction to your readers.”

But I suggest that considered cumulatively, adopting the words-only approach would be preposterous, regardless of whether the number is big or small. You’d be forgoing the eye-catching impact of digits for a negligible benefit. I’d rather do words-and-digits instead. It’s just as well that words-only for numbers ain’t happening.

As always, the fix for digit glitches is … proofreading! If you think that’s too much of an imposition compared with inflicting on your readers words-only for numbers, I don’t know what to tell you.

(Regarding the image at the top of this post, it’s by Tom Kretchmar, whose comment to Nick Bullard’s post (here) links here to an image on Instagram that opts for five thousand dollars to replace a strike-through words-and-digits version. But Tom made clear to me separately that he’s not advocating using words only—he’s against using both words and digits but otherwise doesn’t have a preference regarding what convention you should use instead. My thanks to Tom for allowing me to use his image.)

About the author

Ken Adams is the leading authority on how to say clearly whatever you want to say in a contract. He’s author of A Manual of Style for Contract Drafting, and he offers online and in-person training around the world. He’s also chief content officer of LegalSifter, Inc., a company that combines artificial intelligence and expertise to assist with review of contracts.

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