Category Archives: Drafting as Writing

My Discussion With the Chicago Style Q&A Regarding Capitalization of Words Denoting Political Divisions

The Chicago Manual of Style is an essential resource. It’s useful even for contract drafters (see this 2012 post). But I’ve long had a quibble …

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“However So Described” and a Different Way to Handle Redundancy

At last week’s seminar in Sydney, one of the participants asked me about the phrase however so described. I told her that I’d look into …

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A Case Study in Eliminating a String of Nouns from a Contract

Consider the following (emphasis added): This agreement is personal to the Employee. The Employee shall not assign any of the Employee’s rights or delegate any …

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Is “The Chicago Manual of Style” Relevant to Contract Drafters?

I was surprised to have my publisher point out to me that although in the manuscript for the third edition of MSCD I had cited …

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Court Describes Contract Language as “Gibberish”

The reader who goes by the name A. Wright Burke, M. Phil., told me about this article by Edmund H. Mahoney in the Hartford Courant. It …

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Goodbye, “Magic Words”

Some readers may have noticed that in this post discussing problematic terms of art I don’t use the phrase “magic words.” I’ve long used “magic …

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The Different Kinds of Problematic Terms of Art Used in Contracts

[This post replaces this previous post, which I deleted, except for the comments. Very occasionally I write something, post it, and then promptly realize that …

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What Terms of Art Are Indispensable? (Deleted Except for Comments)

[I've deleted this post because it has been supplanted by this post. Sorry for the discombobulation!]

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