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An extract from Jerry Levine's post about the six different styles of contract

Some Thoughts on the “Modern Precise” Style of Contract Drafting

Recently I saw this LinkedIn post by Jerry Levine in which he outlines six different styles of contract. The accompanying image is of how his post describes the first two kinds of contract, namely “Traditional/Legalese” and “Modern Precise.” He tags me in “Modern Precise,” saying I “built a whole discipline around this.” Jerry’s post got me thinking. In effect, he … Read More

Why Be a Critic?

In my article Merger Agreements Are Poorly Drafted, published today in Corporate Counsel Now (go here for the article, go here for the related blog post), I discuss the implications of an analysis I did of drafting shortcomings in the merger agreement for one of the biggest deals of 2025. Although this analysis is my most ambitious yet, I’ve done … Read More

One of my annotated extracts of the Norfolk Southern merger agreement

My New Article “Merger Agreements Are Poorly Drafted,” in Corporate Counsel Now

Remember the ACC Docket, published by the Association of Corporate Counsel? Well, it has morphed into Corporate Counsel Now. They’ve just published my article Merger Agreements Are Poorly Drafted. It’s here. The spicy thing about this article is that it’s not just an article. Instead, it’s also a portal to my analysis of the merger agreement providing for Union Pacific’s … Read More

Does Contract-Drafting AI Present the Same Risks As Medical AI?

In this post, I consider the risks posed by medical AI, then consider how to structure contract-drafting AI. The Risks of Medical AI Let’s start with medical AI. If you want some gripping reading, check out this LinkedIn article, The Great Inversion: How Healthcare AI Stopped Helping Doctors and Started Replacing Them. It’s by a surgeon, John Ferguson. It describes … Read More

“Realistic Possibility”

A reader sent me a link to this Times article on “weasel words.” I’ve already done battle with weasel words. See this 2012 post about likely and probable, which features two court opinions expressing differing notions on how likely relates to probable. And here’s some of what MSCD has to say: Even if you assume that it’s clear what likely … Read More

A Trial Balloon: “Drafting Clearer Contracts: Testing”

If you’ve read my recent posts, you might have noticed a consistent theme: does being an informed consumer of contract language matter? If it does matter, then presumably the more ways one has to become an informed consumer of contract language, the better. Hence Drafting Clearer Contracts: On Demand, in addition to Drafting Clearer Contracts: Masterclass and Drafting Clearer Contracts: … Read More

Being an Informed Consumer of Contract Language Will Always Matter

I think of my core mission as helping you become an informed consumer of contract language. By “an informed consumer of contract language,” I mean someone who knows how to say clearly and concisely in a contract whatever you want to say. As a practical matter, I suggest that means someone who’s familiar with my book A Manual of Style … Read More

Now Launched: “Drafting Clearer Contracts: On Demand”

The next piece in my Drafting Clearer Contracts, uh, empire is Drafting Clearer Contracts: On Demand. It’s now live: go here. Currently, it consists of 45 videos and four multiple-choice quizzes. On 1 May 2026 and on the beginning of each subsequent month, I’ll make available a further 25 or so videos and who knows how many quizzes. Once the … Read More

Netflix, Inc. v. DivX, LLC: Again, Principles of Interpretation Aren’t Rules of Grammar

Thanks to tipster Glenn West, I learned of an opinion of the U.S. Court of Appeals for the Federal Circuit: Netflix, Inc. v. DivX, LLC, No. 2024-1541, 2026 WL 405791, at *1 (Fed. Cir. 13 Feb. 2026). It involves a patent dispute. Here’s the language at issue, from claim 1 of the patent: locating encryption information that identifies encrypted portions … Read More