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The Forthright Negotiator Principle and Creative Ambiguity

In this December 2007 post I wrote about the Delaware Chancery Court opinion in the litigation between United Rentals Inc. and two Cerberus Partners acquisition vehicles. But I wasn’t so much interested in the opinion as in what had caused the confusion and how it could have been avoided, so I didn’t even mention the principle that the court invoked, … Read More

Using the ABA’s Deal Points Studies

One of the more useful perks of being a member of the American Bar Association is that you get access to the “Deal Points Studies” prepared by the Section of Business Law’s Committee on Mergers and Acquisitions. There are various Deal Points Studies; I’ve recently consulted the 2008 Strategic Buyer/Public Target M&A Deal Points Study and the 2007 Private Target … Read More

MSCD Second Edition Now Available on Amazon

The first few months after the ABA publishes a book, you can purchase it only through them. Thereafter, they start to distribute it through the usual online sellers. Consistent with that, the second edition of A Manual of Style for Contract Drafting is now available on Amazon; click here to go to the Amazon page for MSCD. Of course, given … Read More

What to Do When the Other Side Wants to Change Your MSCD-Compliant Language

Longtime reader Michael Fleming sent me the following cry of pain: Below is a little taste of a markup I received from the other side of a deal I’m working on: MASTER SERVICES AGREEMENT This Mmaster Sservices Aagreement (“Agreement”) is dated ________, 20__ (the “Effective Date”) and is between FLEMING’S CLIENT, INC., a Minnesota corporation (“Client”), and IDIOTIC LARGE COMPANY, … Read More

Which Come First, Schedules or Exhibits?

When you assemble the components of a contract that refers to schedules and exhibits, which should come first after the main part of the contract? The schedules or the exhibits? Thanks to a reader inquiry, I’ve now considered that gripping question for the first time. I recommend you put the schedules first: Schedules consist of materials that could be in … Read More

I Won’t Be Using Twitter Any Time Soon (I Think)

[Update: You might want to read the comments.] You may have heard of Twitter. It’s a free social-networking service that allows users to send updates and read other users’ updates. Updates are text-based posts of up to 140 characters in length; they’re commonly referred to as “tweets.” Twitter describes itself as “a service for friends, family, and co–workers to communicate and … Read More

Proofreading Tips?

I recently received the following inquiry from reader Kathleen: I was wondering, do you have a proofreading system or any tips? Especially for when there is quick turn-around and I don’t have time to let a document sit to come back with fresh eyes (and I don’t have access to someone who can proofread for me). I would appreciate any … Read More

Using Parentheses Instead of “Respectively”

In MSCD 12.328, I say that respectively serves to indicate that each item in a list earlier in a sentence is to be paired with its counterpart in a list that follows and contains an equal number of items, as in The first and second prizes went to Marie and Frank, respectively. But in a recent redrafting project, it struck … Read More

Seminar Discount for Members of the ABA Section of Business Law

If you’ve come here through the link the MSCD item in this month’s Section of Business Law eSource, welcome! While you’re here, let me tell you about a discount that I’ve arranged for section members.  I give with West Legalworks a public version of my “Contract Drafting—Language and Layout” seminar; click here for information about the seminars scheduled for the first … Read More

In San Francisco on Wednesday, December 10, With Some Free Time

On Tuesday, December 9, I’ll be in San Francisco to give my “Language and Layout” seminar for West Legalworks. I’ll be taking the red-eye home on Wednesday, and I’ll have some time free during the day. So if your company or law firm is based in the bay area and you’d like to shoot the breeze about contracts and what … Read More