More Mischief with Commas

I learned from this post on Language Log that use of commas in a provision of the Bankruptcy Code has become an issue in the bankcruptcy case of the Philadelphia News. Being a veteran of comma-related strife myself, I have a soft spot for such matters.

But prevailing in any comma dispute comes a distant second-best to avoiding such fights. If the meaning of a given contract provision changes drastically depending on the presence or absence of one or more commas, you might want to restructure it.

Updated 12:46 p.m. EST, Dec. 17, 2009: Reader Steven Sholk joined in the fun by telling me about this story on, about a “single contentious comma inserted into a paragraph of a United Nations climate deal two years ago.”

About the author

Ken Adams is the leading authority on how to say clearly whatever you want to say in a contract. He’s author of A Manual of Style for Contract Drafting, and he offers online and in-person training around the world. He’s also chief content officer of LegalSifter, Inc., a company that combines artificial intelligence and expertise to assist with review of contracts.

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