Some Defined-Term Insanity, Featuring “Collectively”

If you ever find me on the floor in the fetus position, gibbering softly, it will be because nonsense of the following sort has finally got to me.

I’ve long mocked using individually a “Party” and collectively the “Parties” when creating the unnecessary defined term Party. I had suspected that there was potential for all sorts of other mischief featuring collectively (or together)—if you’re giving Party that treatment, why not do the same for other nouns? But only today did I have the courage to go in search of it. And lo and behold, observe what I found on the post-apocalyptic wasteland that is EDGAR:

Certain provisions of the Code apply specifically to our chief executive officer, chief financial officer, senior finance officer, controller, senior vice presidents, vice presidents and any other persons who perform similar functions for the Company (each, a “senior officer,” and collectively, the “senior officers”).

… and (b) sell participation interests in the Loan one or more times (the transactions referred to in clauses (a) and (b) above, each a “Secondary Market Transaction” and collectively “Secondary Market Transactions”) …

Subject to Clauses 12.4 and 12.5, Lonza shall indemnify the Customer, its Affiliates , and their respective officers, employees and agents (each of the foregoing a “Customer Indemnitee” and, collectively, “Customer Indemnitees”) for any Losses …

The purpose of this communication (this “Confirmation”) is to set forth the terms and conditions of the partial termination (the “Transaction”) of the rights and obligations under and in respect of the following transactions (each such transaction, a “Relevant Transaction” and collectively the “Relevant Transactions” and the terminated portion of each such Relevant Transaction, the “Terminated Portion”) …

Subject to Section 2.1(a)(ii), beginning on the Effective Date, Providers will provide Recipient (or, if requested by Recipient, Recipient’s Affiliates) each of the services set forth on Schedule A (each a “Service” and collectively, the “Services”).

Apparently some of us think you can no longer trust readers to understand how the singular and plural work.

For the love of gawd, please don’t do this, whether for Party or any other noun. Just do the singular, with each. And now excuse me. If you need me, you’ll find me in the fetus position.

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Ken Adams is the leading authority on how to say clearly whatever you want to say in a contract. He’s author of A Manual of Style for Contract Drafting, and he offers online and in-person training around the world. He’s also chief content officer of LegalSifter, Inc., a company that combines artificial intelligence and expertise to assist with review of contracts.